Another great chapter!

Date: 2013-10-09 11:54 am (UTC)
Oh my gosh. Poor Leila! I want to hug her too.

Leila's husband being in Iraq is a pretty good reason for him to be overseas. Geoff seemed like he was very honourable.

Your portrayal of Leila is wonderful. She stays away from people who could help her to protect them, not out of pride. I think they would help her, if they knew what was going on.

I love the way Allie and Lindsay take care of Leila. The backstory development is also great!

Oh, are they going to the ball next? That could be very interesting...

Part 2 of 'Shifting Colours' is on my LiveJournal, if you want to check it out!

P.S. This is a strange question, but what's Officer Rayne's first name?
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