Another good chapter! I love the way Allie and Lindsay helped Leila.
Leila seems very tense around men.
Franco is a Wizard? Good twist! For a moment I thought he was Grey in disguise; you got me worried for the girls a bit there. You know you're involved in a story when you worry for the characters.
Please may I borrow Officer Rayne for a 'Shifting Colours' installment?
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Date: 2013-10-01 08:49 pm (UTC)Leila seems very tense around men.
Franco is a Wizard? Good twist! For a moment I thought he was Grey in disguise; you got me worried for the girls a bit there. You know you're involved in a story when you worry for the characters.
Please may I borrow Officer Rayne for a 'Shifting Colours' installment?